Jasmine Hart

Anorexic egg-timer, no more sand falls through you. I stroke your cold waist and tell you it's thin, tell you you're perfect, and I need you, I need you, but ...

This is nice. I like the idea behind it and how it starts slowly and winds down towards the end. I'd change "tumble". If you're dancing gracefully, you're unlikely to ...

I think I'm missing something, so I'm not sure how much use my review will be to you, but I'll give it a shot. I love the first line, it ...

This sounds interesting. Character Profile: Name: Dominica Russo (nee Moretti) Age: 24 Family: Mother Allessandra, father Carlo, three sisters, one older ( Elda, 28, married with children), and two yo

I keep trying to post, but I just can't think of anything. Suggestions?

1)Write a short story and a poem of decent quality and submit them. 2) Actually write 3) Finish "The Last Summer" 4) Stop letting "The Last Summer" distract me and ...

I really don't like Mr. Darcy. He's so arrogant and condesceding and self-important. And a snob. I'm not too crazy about Edward either; he's very controlling and obsessive (Jacob all ...

No worries Stella. What time? That's a very good question...I'm not good at time periods...feel free to make suggestions/share your thoughts. Alicia I slung the more irritating of the two ...

Hmmm...let me see...the first line is good, I love the alliteration of "teem and tangle". I've read this about four times now trying to think of something useful to say. ...

Thanks Kit, thanks Princess. Feel free to start posting Princess. Can I just ask before we begin that there are no double posts and that people post a minumum of ...

Ooops. Thanks for pointing that out Stella! Of course you can join! Haha, that's funny about your dream. Seems your imagination is still active when you sleep! Characters: [s]Rebecca [/s] ...

Thanks. It's pronounce Uh-Sheen. Characters: [s]Rebecca [/s] [s]Alicia[/s] [s]Marie [/s] [s]Oisín [/s] [s]Christopher[/s] Martha Jennifer

Thanks guys. And thanks for the name meanings Moon.It's especially interesting about Jennifer and Martha's names. Yes, of course you can change it to Nola if you like. Characters: [s]Rebecca[/s] ...

Thanks for joining. Love the profile. :) Characters: [s]Rebecca[/s] [s]Alicia[/s] Marie Oisín Christopher Martha Jennifer

Ya, you choose from one of the characters I've listed above and write up a profile for them like I've done for Alicia.